User:Lupineflower/No-till farming/Livg21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lupineflower


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lupineflower/No-till_farming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No-till farming

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi there!

Overall, it seems like you are doing a great job so far! I noticed that you have a good structure going in which you have a title for your section, as well as sub headers under it. The content you have seems relevant to both the main header you incorporated, but also to the topic as a whole. Additionally, you seem to have already incorporated a section that relates to the class.

You seem to have a good mix of both direct links from words you used, as well as citations at the end of sentences that link to the references. I do notice that some claims do not have one of these links or citations that connect to the references you included, so maybe add those so readers will have a better idea of where specific claims you are making come from. Your tone seems to be neutral, but I think this could also be improved by adding more citations to make your statements appear to be more factual.

The content you have is both relevant and useful to the bigger topic you are focusing on, and I think you address key aspects that are left out in the original article. I'm excited for you to continue to expand on these sub header topics, and you could also include another sub header or two if you feel that these are complete.

Overall, I enjoy what you've done so far and I love how you've already incorporated a section that is very relevant to the discussions we have in class. I look forward to seeing you continue and wish you luck!