User:Lupineflower/No-till farming/PurpleSnails Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LupineFlower


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lupineflower/No-till_farming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No-till farming

Evaluate the drafted changes
The section Profits, Economics, Yield, contains good information but maybe change the title or add more information regarding profits, economics and yield. Right now the section is lacking evidence/ data of those topics and I think if those were addressed more the section would be a great addition to the article. I was having some difficulty reading the material and I think that is due to wording and sentence structure.

I like that you have added benefits and issues, this lets us see both sides of no-till farming which when you go back to the original article, there isn't much about benefits and issues.

The section regarding Environmental Policy is great, it has lots of information stating what is being done to prevent tillage.