User:Lupineflower/No-till farming/Tamaflam Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lupineflower


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lupineflower/No-till_farming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No-till farming

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft is both concise and clear, as well as holds a neutral tone. There doesn't seem to be any bias language that would impact the neutrality of the article and all of the sources provided are valid in relation to the article. I think they did a great job in staying organized with adding to an existing section while also adding another one. I believe that this helps to add the overall quality of the article but could be further improved through expansion of the environmental policies mentioned tie into no-till farming. Expanding on the economic section would benefit the article as well. Maybe providing statistics and numbers to back up some of the points in that section would be a good idea. Overall, I think that this is a great start and what is written is great but I suggest adding more on the economical impacts or benefits of no-till farming as well as tying in the environmental policies with no-till farming and how these policies impact the agricultural technique.