User:Luvv.Empress/Baking/JamarK0709 Peer Review

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Luvv.Empress


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Luvv.Empress/Baking
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Baking:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Peer Review: Baking Article

Lead:

The lead "Baking" provides a concise introduction to baking, mentioning its method, historical significance, and relation to barbecuing. However, it lacks specific details about major sections of the article.

Content:

- The content is relevant to the topic of baking, covering various aspects from techniques to historical development. It would be helpful to include a brief section on the science of baking to enhance understanding.

- No the article doesn't address clear indication about the Wikipedia's equity gaps or includes information related to historically underrepresented populations.

Tone and Balance:

- The tone appears neutral, and there are no apparent biases.

- The article seems informative without appearing persuasive towards any particular position.

Sources and References:

- New content is backed up by reliable secondary sources, with inline citations for the added information.

Organization:

- The content is well-written and easy to read, with no apparent grammatical or spelling errors.

- The organization is generally good, but consider breaking down the information into more subheadings for better clarity and navigation.

Images and Media:

- No images or media have been added for review.

Overall Impressions:

- The content has improved the overall quality of the article, making it more informative.

- Strengths include comprehensive coverage of baking and its history.

- To improve, consider addressing the suggestions mentioned above, providing more specific details in the lead, and ensuring thorough citation of sources.