User:Lvega2/Puerto Rican Communist Party/Jorgee829 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lvega2 (Luis)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lvega2/Puerto_Rican_Communist_Party?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Puerto Rican Communist Party

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Although your edited lead is not much different than the original Wikipedia lead, it helps the audience understand a little more about what the Puerto Rican communist party was. It also seems to be unfinished so I would just say to finish this sentence and add a bit more information.

Content:

You added a whole new section and it works well to include seeing as the original Wikipedia article only has one section. Political context also really delves deeper into why the party formed and their motivations. I realize that the other sections are unfinished, but I would just say to continue working on them and if you continue the way you did with the Political context, I think it will be good.

Tone/Balance:

The tone seems very neutral, which I know is quite a difficult thing to do when working on this project. However, you manage to do it really well with what you have contributed to the article.

Organization:

I believe that the subsections you have and the order they are in will work to coherently provide the information necessary to present the scope of the Puerto Rican Communist party. I think the subsections you plan on doing along with the one that is already in Wikipedia will work great to present the information in a well informed manner. I do not think you need to rearrange or add any subsections unless you feel that you have to, but it works well the way you have set it up.

Images and Media:

I would say to add some images to the article, if you can. There is really only one picture in the original article and I think including more will help strengthen the information you have provided and will provide.

'''References: '''I think the references you are utilizing are great. I am going to assume you have more sources that you will use for the other subsections, in which case that is great.

I think what you have so far works really well and the final product will be very useful for people who want to learn more about the Puerto Rican Communist Party.