User:Lvmcintire/IMDb/Brandon Figaro Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Lvmcintire.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lvmcintire/IMDb


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * IMDb

Lead
Hello, Lvmcintire. Based on the current work you have done for your draft, the lead section has not been updated to display new content that you have written. The lead section does not contain an introductory sentence that clearly and concisely states the topic of the article. The lead must include a short summary of the article's important sections. The lead must include information that is not already in the article.

Content
The content that you have added is relevant to the article. The content that you have added is up-to-date. However, content is missing from the lead section. Content is also missing from the section pertaining to film titles. Content is also missing from the section regarding the body of the article.

Tone and Balance
The content that you have added to your draft is written in a neutral tone.

Sources and References
All the new content that you added to the draft has been backed up by reliable sources of information. The content accurately reflects the words that are from the sources. This draft could benefit from more thorough sources, which will provide you with more details to write about in your article draft. Your first source is from this current year, and the other source is from 2007. Your first source has been created by various authors.

Organization
The content that you have written is concise and clear, which means that it is easy to read. The content that you have added to your draft does not contain spelling errors, and there are no grammatical errors. When you add more content to your draft, it must be broken down into different sections.

Overall impressions
Overall, the content in your draft has slightly improved the quality of the article. The strengths of the content that you have added are interesting. The first strength of the content that you added is that the content was written with good grammar and spelling. The second strength of the content that you added involves the fact that the content was cited from reliable sources. The content that was added can be improved by putting it into the lead section of your draft, and specifically placing it under the subheading for lead sentences.