User:Lvogel1/High-protein diet/Kindslime Peer Review

General info
Lvogel1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:High-protein diet
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):High-protein diet

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- Lead encapsulates what the topic is very well. Direct and concise.

- Has descriptions that point to different sections of the article.

Content:

- All relevant to the topic and seems up to date.

Tone and Balance:

- Appears neutral. Content points out that there are disputes on the benefits of a high-protein diet.

- Does not try and persuade, simply states what is known and disputed.

Organization

- Good organization. Glad that you have a dedicated section of fad high-protein diets, as there are quite of few.

- "Many high protein diets are high in saturated fat and restrict intake of carbohydrates." - Change to "Many high-protein diets..."

Images and Media

- Image adds to the article and has a clear, applicable caption.