User:Lwang6/Donghu District/Ivychen0619 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lwang6


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lwang6/Donghu_District?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Donghu District

Evaluate the drafted changes
The editor did a great job in the lead part, in which the lead been concisely provided a brief description of the Donghu district while it started with clear introductory sentences. All the content is up to date, but I suggest the editor provide one more section about the notable people who come from or are related to Donghu District.; make sure this content comes from reliable sources; provided the image of these notable people if possible.

In addition, the overall tone for the content seems neutral. The image is excellent and provides detailed information about the district.