User:Lwang6/Donghu District/Steph.tsaii Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lwang6


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lwang6/Donghu_District?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Donghu District

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really appreciate the detailed information you added in your article, especially the history and geography sections. The content is neutral and the sources are reliable as I see that the majority of them comes from government sources. One section that you can maybe add is the climate at Donghu District (just a suggestion though!). Another thing to note is that, I find the Demographics section consisting too many numbers, even though I really like the graph you made. I also have made some minor edits on the grammar part of the article.