User:Lward12/C. K. Prahalad/Okrowe Peer Review

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General info
Lward12
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://w.wiki/8E74
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): https://w.wiki/8E77

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Lward12!

In all thing's bibliography, the sources you have look great. The only one that raises a flag is the one from Encyclopedia.com, but I also understand that there is not much out there on these theorists. I would suggest looking into the article on encyclopedia.com to see what their references are if possible, so that you are guaranteed a reliable source. Other than that, everything looks to be as it should (from my understanding). The references section is literally perfect, I'm jealous!

Sandbox and collected thoughts from the discussion board-wise, it looks like you have something for everything that you listed and set out to add. These edits you have drafted read very well so far! My favorite thing is adding personal details that really humanizes these theorists. There is so little out there, and that extra personal touch is really warming. We can give a nod to the people who supported these theorists and who those theorists attribute their successes to.

Overall, everything is looking great!