User:Ly1729560145/Sauropsida/Kevin.vaughey Peer Review

This is a very good article, it is very informative and well planned out. There could be a little more substance and maybe a couple more references. You are definitely writing the correct stuff just maybe add a little more. The picture is also very helpful in understanding the first couple sentences. You did write "Comparing an avian brain to that to a mammal" I think you might have meant to write "of" the second time you wrote "to", and you wrote brain instead of brains in your last sentence. Your references seem to be good, I think you could maybe add a little more information from the second one to your article but you could also add some information from one or two more different articles maybe focusing more on the differences in brain structure seen between the sub classes of Sauropsida.

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