User:Lyang82/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Lavinia Dock


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article's lead is well written. The article is well organized. There are a few grammatical errors. More information can be provided about Dock's work in women's suffrage and her work work in setting the foundation for Hopkins Nursing.


 * Sources
 * https://www.anb.org/view/10.1093/anb/9780198606697.001.0001/anb-9780198606697-e-1500182
 * https://sites.google.com/site/nursingera18801900/samanthas
 * https://www.aahn.org/dock

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Daniel Coit Gilman


 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead of this article is well written. Overall, the article is well organized and the content is relevant. I think more information about Gilman's contribution to Johns Hopkins, reform in research and college education, and his career can be added to this article. With these information added, I think it would strengthen this article's notability.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jhu.edu/about/history/gilman-address/
 * https://socialwelfare.library.vcu.edu/people/gilman-daniel-coit/
 * https://socialwelfare.library.vcu.edu/social-work/daniel-coit-gilmans-role-in-building-the-profession-of-social-work-education/
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/4306502?seq=21#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/984068?seq=1#metadata_info_tab_contents

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Morbidity and mortality conference


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is poorly organized. There is no lead. The article is not divided by sections. Some links do not work. The information given is relevant to the topic. However, it can be improved if the information was grouped into sections and further developed. The article can be developed by adding sections such as history, effectiveness of M&MC, style of M&MC, purpose of M&MC, logistics, etc.


 * Sources
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1831665/
 * https://acphospitalist.org/archives/2018/07/the-new-improved-m-and-m.htm
 * https://www.ahrq.gov/downloads/pub/advances2/vol2/Advances-Deis_82.pdf
 * https://www.physiciansweekly.com/morbidity-and-mortality-conference/
 * https://journalofethics.ama-assn.org/article/error-medicine-role-morbidity-and-mortality-conference/2005-04

Option 4

 * Article title
 * M. Carey Thomas


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article includes detailed information. However, most of the information has no citation. M. Carey Thomas was known for her battle for women's rights and organizing a campaign that help persuade Johns Hopkins to open its education to women. The article did not mention too much about her affiliation with Johns Hopkins and her battle for women's rights. Aside from missing some key information, the article is well written. The language and tone is appropriate and the information in the other categories are well-organized and thorough.


 * Sources
 * https://www.britannica.com/biography/Martha-Carey-Thomas
 * http://www.brynmawr.edu/library/speccoll/guides/thomas.shtml
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3012286/
 * http://www.brynmawr.edu/library/speccoll/guides/thomaspersonal.shtml https://msa.maryland.gov/megafile/msa/speccol/sc3500/sc3520/013500/013572/html/13572bio.html

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Medical robot


 * Article Evaluation
 * Overall, the article is not well developed. The lead sentence can provide a better and more specific definition on what medical robots are. The rest of the lead can be deleted because it is too specific. I think the lead needs to be reorganized and rephrased.
 * The article does not provide much information about medical robots. I think sections such as the history of medical robots, it uses in medicine, research on medical robots, and statistical information about medical robots can be included. The information in the article is also poorly cited.


 * Sources
 * https://online-engineering.case.edu/blog/medical-robots-making-a-difference
 * https://www.sciencemag.org/robotics-and-medicine
 * https://www.asme.org/topics-resources/content/top-6-robotic-applications-in-medicine
 * https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4247417/
 * https://www.britannica.com/science/robotic-surgery