User:LydBo/Gonatus onyx/Leahgkim Peer Review

General info
LydBo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:LydBo/Gonatus onyx
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gonatus onyx

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information you added in your sandbox looks great! The content is all well written and neutral. It looks like all your sources are reputable and are from within the past 25 years. It was a bit difficult to find the edits that were made throughout the article initially, but the new information helps the article flow much better. One of the concerns brought up in the spreadsheet was ensuring the wording made sense to non-STEM majors, but I think that you guys did a great job of using easy to follow language.