User:Lyjslife/Standpoint Theory/Aen4662066 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Lyjslife
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Standpoint theory

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? The last edit was June 2020, so not yet.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes, the lead is great from the beginning.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, with hyperlinks, which is great.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? A bit overly detailed, it could use some slimming, particularly a potential slimming of the third paragraph.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? No new content added yet.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Not to my interpretation.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? Yes, in a really good way as it talks about Feminist Standpoint and Indigenous Standpoint.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, especially as there is a Critique section. That is imperative to keep the content neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Not to my impression.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, it is very balanced to me.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Of the sources that are listed, they are extremely reputable.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes.
 * Are the sources current? Yes.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? It seems to me that they're mostly academic/think-tank sources, I would include a more broad range of sources.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? What I clicked did

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes. Very much so.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Not what I could see.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? It could be broken down a bit more to more clearly organize and reflect certain points. (i.e. more applications)

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? No. Images would be a great start. Perhaps some diagrams.
 * Are images well-captioned? No images.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?