User:Lylabutler/Epirus dancing grasshopper/Annamarkelin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lylabutler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lylabutler/Epirus_dancing_grasshopper?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * does not exsist

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The beginning section is strong so far. I think it would be beneficial to add general characteristics of this grasshopper such as key anatomical features. You could also dive into what makes this species of grasshoppers different than others. Other than adding a little more general information, which you are starting from scratch so you can add anything, the information you have put here is accurate and relevant.

Content and Tone and Balance

The structure and tone of the information added is neutral and very straight to the point. You do a good job of not adding unnecessary information that does not lead to inform about this species. As far as content goes, your side bar is structured perfectly. I like the graphics you included as well as the addition of the conservation status. If you are looking to add to your content any further I think it would be important to start a section on why this species is critically endangered.

Sources

You probably know this but you have added only links instead of references so just make sure you change that to a full reference:) All of your websites used are reliable sources.

Overall

You are starting from absolutely nothing so I think you have a very solid start to this article. All of the content looked good as well as the images and graphics. Just take a look at the references and then if you feel the need to add more I would totally dive into the causes of endangerment because it would tie into class well! Good job!

Additional resource

https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Vassiliki-Kati/publication/366657685_Saving_the_last_dance_conservation_actions_for_the_Epirus_grasshopper_Chorthippus_lacustris/links/63ad3769a03100368a37aef9/Saving-the-last-dance-conservation-actions-for-the-Epirus-grasshopper-Chorthippus-lacustris.pdf

-gives insight on conservation efforts