User:Lylabutler/Epirus dancing grasshopper/BeckxStrap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lylabutler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Lylabutler/Epirus_Dancing_Grasshopper
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a good start! A couple of things that I saw were that the introduction part names the species as critically endangered while the speciesbox thing is partly still the house mouse info (Name at top is still Mus musculus, conservation status is listed as least concern, and the range/world map for population). I think it would be good to add more about why the species is endangered and what is being done to reduce these effects if anything :)