User:Lylamarasco/Emotional support animal/Majorartstudio Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lylamaraso username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Emotional support animal - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, lylamaraso the start of the article the information you added in the lead is very good. Think nothing should be changed in the lead. I could understand it well and was very clear to read. I think to edit more of the article and add some changes to it my opinion. Add a little bit to the misrepresentation section and the handler's section. Is this all you’re adding to an article, or do you still plan on adjusting things to the article? That’s the part I’m a little confused and are you just editing the lead section? In the article, the body section could add the sentences you deleted and highlight the ones you added. But overall, everything looks great to me just thought you add a little more to your article and add more information into those sections I stated earlier.