User:Lynamai/User:Jrhombe/sandbox/Lynamai Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) - Jill
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Jrhombe/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - There was no Lead.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? - N/A
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? -
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? - N/A
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? - N/A

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? -Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? - No, they content were in the correct place.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?- Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? - No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? - All viewpoints were address evenly.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? - No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? - Yes
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? - Yes
 * Are the sources current? - Yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? - Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? - Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? - No
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? - Yes

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media - N/A


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? - I believe the information she add, will increase the quality of the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? - Your lifestyle section was really detailed and informative.
 * How can the content added be improved? - I enjoy reading about this parasite. It was easy to follow the life cycle of the parasite. The life cycle was really informative. I would prefer the subheadings in Life cycle to be deleted. Maybe, find a way that you can just use all that information into just one section? Or separate the intermediate stage and description then the definite stage and description. Also, I prefer to use the BEHAVIORAL DIFFERENCES into another section, if that is possible.I think it could be good to use in life style,or maybe part of an introduction. I believe DISTRIBUTION AND HISTORY can be part of an introduction, in my opinion. Its a good way to start off talking about the parasite and a great way to start off the article. What you have now is great and really informative. This will turn out into a great addition to the article