User:Lyola-ann/Kwele people/Nelso4Bj Peer Review

The opening to the Mask section is too broad, the fact that Masks are an African art form doesn't need to be on this page, could work if reworded like, "Like many Societies on the African continent, The Kwele people also make masks for specific ceremonies." some context for the ceremonies the different types of masks are for may help.

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