User:Lyra.taylor/Social media/Dattabase08 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Lyra.taylor) (Tang Daisy) Aisha Taiwo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Lyra.taylor/Social media


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media

Evaluate the drafted changes
Keep a heads up on your starting line, it shouldn't be first person, needs to remain neutral and non bias. The lead needs to be a hook to the topic that's being written about in the article.