User:LyricSykes/Polygonum engelmannii/Lwill17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

LyricSykes


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LyricSykes/Polygonum_engelmannii?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Polygonum engelmannii

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is well organized and informative throughout. The lead effectively introduces the plant and common name. The description of the plant was very through and only contained relevant information. The taxonomy section is missing a period at the end of the last sentence. In the distribution and habitat section, the sentence that begins with "you" should be reworded so it does not refer to the reader directly. The cultural significance sections contains a grammatical error "there a" change to "there are". Overall, the article was well written.