User:Lzr319646/Marie-Louise Lachapelle/Tran (Chloe) Tran Bao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Lzr319646


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User: Lzr319646/Marie-Louise_Lachapelle?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marie-Louise Lachapelle

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The user only made some change on grammar errors therefore the article still look the same as before. In order to improve the content, the user must provide more up-to-date information or adding more sources.