User:M.Salvatorelli/Disciplinary Literacy/Jaimekatz926 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

M. Salvatorelli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:M.Salvatorelli/Disciplinary_Literacy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like this on track to be a great article. There are many details about the topic and show you have done your research. However, Wikipedia citing and APA citing are different. Your article does not need APA citing, it needs Wikipedia citing. I had an issue with this as well as first and I would suggest going back to the resources on citing for Wikipedia, which helped me tremendously. Most of your sentences right now are bullet points and should eventually be converted into complete sentences, but the language is definitely academic.