User:M.davis26/Louisa Picquet/Davinp23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

m.davis26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Louisa Picquet
 * Louisa Picquet

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

- could possibly add a little more about what the article is going to discuss

-make references to her experiences to show why her slave narrative is important

Structure

- there is a clear structure to the page

Information

- Definitely would look for some possible images which will help fill space