User:MAMOPHARAOH/Translanguaging/Aygul2022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:MAMOPHARAOH/


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MAMOPHARAOH/Translanguaging/


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Translanguaging

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello Mamopharoah, Good work on the article draft. Here's what I nopticed could be improved: