User:MD092022/Dimer (chemistry)/Cemes4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MD092022


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MD092022/Dimer_%28chemistry%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dimer (chemistry)

Lead

 * No lead/ introduction in sandbox so I’m assuming the existing intro on the page will be used
 * Lead on page provides a good introduction to topic, contains reliable sources

Content

 * All content added to sandbox appears relevant to the topic
 * New content is divided into sections that make it easy to read and understand how the topics relate to the heading
 * Hyperlinks to other pages is also a good addition to the draft

Tone and Balance

 * All added content is neutral with no bias towards a particular position

Sources and References

 * Many reputable sources are included at the bottom of the draft, only some incorporated into the work
 * Looks like citation 3 is missing dates/ not cited properly, might need to be edited manually
 * It might be useful to include references from more than one paper/website in each paragraph to further support all claims

Organization

 * Content is clear and concise
 * Formatting makes the content easy to read
 * No grammatical errors found, some sentences are long and could be shortened/ cut into 2

Images and Media

 * No images/ figures are in the draft
 * Current images in the wiki article are relevant as the show the structure
 * Might be useful to continue adding similar figures for the different types of Dimers listed

Overall, good work! I think the topics the group chose to expand on are very relevant to the topic and could be helpful to people in the future.