User:MD380/Peer review response

Response to the suggested edits (Classmate)

-I have looked at some of the sources, and there are some changes that can be made to include better sources that back up certain statements.

-In terms of comparing LGBT rights in Ghana with other countries, there is already an article which has a table showing the differences between various countries. Considering this article is specifically about Ghana, I don't think it's necessary to compare the laws or history of other countries in this article.

-The new section will be placed at the end of the article since it's talking about current events.

-I can add more details about the bill, but I think the paragraph about the bill speak for itself. This bill is pretty straightforward in what it's trying to achieve.

-I agree about the history section. More details are definitely necessary, and you're right about needing to explain why LGBT rights are opposed in Ghana.

-This was a very helpful review.

 WCI Peer Review Response 

-As stated above, more detail about why LGBT rights are opposed in Ghana should be added to the article.

-I also agree that the "2021 arrests" section should be under the "police action" section.

-However, I think the tone of the article is neutral.