User:MHD2021/Freret Street/Amberzsimmo Peer Review

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MHD2021


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 * User:MHD2021/Freret Street
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is short but to the point. It tells where exactly the street is. The Long’s Bakery section was very short but it felt unfinished. The article lengths are not equal, the Entertainment part is longer than the history section, but again, I’m not sure if that part is finished 100% yet. The article does not lean to one viewpoint or another, and I am unable to guess the perspective of the author. Resource 3 is used a lot but there is quite a bit of resources so it’s not unbalanced now but if resource 3 is used any more it will be. This article is neutral and well written. It is short and some parts are a bit unclear but can be fixed with editing.