User:MHD2021/Freret Street/Ray Ray 2time Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MHD2021


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 * User:MHD2021/Freret Street


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article overall is very good. you provide a good amount of pictures and very informal as well.