User:MHD2021/Freret Street/X.Kyrstenn.x Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MHD2021


 * Link to draft you're review
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MHD2021/Freret_Street
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead to your article was really strong and a great way to start. The brief history behind the street name was nice and simple. Bringing knowledge from the 1940s to 2020 also helped drive your article. Only thing I would say is to add more details of Long Bakery and the ties the restaurant has to Freret Street. Or switch to have the entertainment and restaurant section right before the section about the bakery. Besides that good job formatting looks great.