User:MJF22/Sapajus apella margaritae/Marher2 Peer Review

General info
(MJF22)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MJF22/Sapajus_apella_margaritae?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):N/A

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Great lead, some sentences could be grouped to make this paragraph less wordy and flow better.
 * Great introductory sentence I would make sure that you include all links for terms that have a wikipedia page.
 * I would include a sentence that describes the article's major sections.
 * Lots of great detail, I would check and make sure there's nothing that you could shorten and keep only important details.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is this the most up to date content you could find?
 * No missing content and all the information seems to be useful.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * All content appears to be neutral. No biased claims.
 * Consider combining sentence to make the paragraph flow better.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * All information is backed up by sources.
 * Your article accurately reflect what the cited sources say.
 * I was unsure whether two of your sources are up to date.
 * I would check to make sure that your source come from an unbiased author.
 * Your links all work and I am able to access the information.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Content is well written, I would just make sure it flows and it concise.
 * Minimal grammatical errors, great job!
 * All information is broken down, however, some information from your lead could be moved into a different paragraph if you wanted to.

Overall
Great article! I was able to learn a lot about your topic, maybe just find some more sources if you can and more links overall. Good Job!