User:MJWirth/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Caridea

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because Caridea is a large suborder of shrimp and is very important commercially and environmentally.

Evaluate the article
The lead section

it is over all good, in the last sentence It says "Many other animals with similar names – such as the mud shrimp of Axiidea and the boxer shrimp of Stenopodidea – are not true shrimp, but many have evolved features similar to true shrimp." I would have said while many other animals such as the boxer shrimp and the mud shrimp are called shrimp but are not taxonomically true shrimp

Content

commercial fishing

I would have included the commercial fishing statistics in the first paragraph that deals with commercial fishing rather than in the second paragraph that begins with aquaculture

The article is overall well written and the tone is very informational and neutral. All the images are important and depict examples of shrimp that are part of the suborder Caridea. The sources are all informational and of either peer-reviewed articles or studies done of this suborder.