User:MJ Fielder-Jellsey/Teotihuacan/Lulj2 Peer Review

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MJ Fielder-Jellsey


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 * Teotihuacan
 * Teotihuacan

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It looks like you have a bunch of good sources in your bibliography. I'm not sure if you have an idea of what direction you're going in with your additions to the article, but after reading it, one place I think you could add would be to the "Culture" section. It talks about how architecture distinguished the classes from each other, but doesn't actually say what structures showed which class people were a part of. Also, it mentions that artifacts were found, but doesn't say much beyond that. In general, the section seems to be lacking archaeological data to back up its claims. (ok, I do see that the archaeology section comes later). After reading the archaeological section, a question I have is where are they keeping all of these artifacts? Are they in museums? If yes, are they in Peruvian museums or have they been taken to other countries? I'm excited to see your presentation in class!