User:MKP24/In-group favoritism/Ca$hley Peer Review

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Ashley's Peer Review:

Hi Mahima! The content you added was relevant to your topic and up-to-date. You organized your sections very well and explained your information clearly. There were a couple minor grammatical errors which I went ahead and removed for you. I think you did a great job on maintaining a neutral tone on a topic that may cause emotional reactions. In terms of your sources, Wikipedia prefers review articles. Your first source was a review article and this is definitely appropriate to use, but the rest of your sources are primary, which is discourages. I would look into other review articles to add to your reference list as all of your information was obtained from only one reliable source.