User:MNC-2016/Male prostitution/KennyTharp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MNC-2016, Bem2c4, Elaineamery


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MNC-2016/Male prostitution
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Male prostitution

Evaluate the drafted changes
-I found the intro paragraph to be very to the point, a great set up for the rest of the article. The term "male prostitution" is a very ambiguous topic to tackle, so I thought the intro did well in setting up the pins for the article to come.

-I don't believe the "introduction to prostitution" paragraph to be needed, it just seems to give sparknotes on on what is to come, and anything that may be needed for your upcoming passages could be included to the "history" portion.

-The added in links are plentiful, and I think you're off to a good foot by those standards

-The "Examples" seem to be randomly placed, not worthless information, but seem to be filler information. Also could argue that the couple usages that are beneficial could also be added to "History" as well.

-I found the regulation article to be very interesting, however I think that there is a chance to make the section more involved. Right now, it's capped with just the US and the British Empire. You could easily group more countries legislation regarding male prostitution to add some more fluff to your work. Overall, I found the "Regulation" section to be one of the more eye catching sections, so definitely focus upon helping and improving that section.

-After reading "Feminist Studies", I don't really understand the connection between the two. While I understand the "hidden population" aspect, I think that feminist studies and male prostitution are mutually exclusive.

-Short and to the point, pop culture has to have many other options and area to grow upon.

-"Help and Support for Male Sex Workers" is quite an interesting direction, as it's something I would have never considered before reading. I'm sure there are plenty of content and articles regarding the health and safety of sex workers, and I bet that if there's any direct works related to male workers could only boom this page with validity.

-Lastly, to point out the obvious, the top of the page claims it needs "additional citations for verification." Could only help to improve your work!