User:MNC-2016/Male prostitution/Lilurkel44 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Elaineamery, Bem2c4, MNC-2016


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Male prostitution
 * Male prostitution

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Tone & Balance
In several sections like the introduction to prostitution, the article comes off as trying to persuade the reader instead of being neutral. I would suggest refraining from using facts based of "some people" and use facts backed by credible sources.

Images & Media
There are not many images throughout the article to capture the interest of the reader. Adding a couple more content relevant images might do more to capture a reader's eye.