User:MOIN2022/To Live (novel)/Dengtianhei Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(MOIN2022)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MOIN2022/To_Live_%28novel%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * To Live (novel)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi there I'm Jesse and I'll be peer-reviewing your article. I'm impressed by the work you've done to improve the article! The lead has been updated and provides a clear overview of the topic. I saw that you have moved some portion of the lead and added it to a new section, and I think it's a good move to prevent the lead from being too detailed. The content added is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The synopsis section is expanded into chapters and I think it will provide detailed information for readers, but I think that part is going to be challenging. The tone is neutral and claims in the article are properly cited with reliable sources. The organization is good overall, but I think Theme and Genre can be moved to the lead section as they are usually short description. Images are following wikipedia regulations. There are some grammar errors that I will help to correct. Good job and good luck with editing!