User:MPHILLI/Folk psychology/Jalyn547 Peer Review

Peer Review

General info
MPHILLI
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:MPHILLI/Folk psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Folk psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the contributions you made so far. I think they fit well with the text already there. I think the first sentence, (Many psychologists either view folk psychology from two angles: the relative view or the intentional stance, needs to be reworked. Maybe change "types" to "perspectives" or "standpoints". I have a few suggestions. Part of what makes a good wiki article is the lead. The lead is the part of the article that introduces the topic to readers and gives a brief description on the major points of the article. I suggest adding a few sentences about the structure and main points of the article. I think you are on a good track though.