User:MRR1993/Environmental issues with coral reefs/AllyEsmond Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) The article has a nice flow between sections and I liked how detailed the clean up methods were.
 * 2) I would put the causes and effects of oil spills first, so then it could lead into the effects on coral reef communities and impact on coral reef structure.  I would also make some grammatical changes (condense sentence two and three in impacts on coral reef communities).  Additionally, I suggest to avoid using the same few words to start every sentence.  It will aid in the flow of the section within the article.
 * 3) All parts of the article are very informative with a neutral tone.  It feels like a very comprehensive understanding of oil spills that does not have a biased opinion.  It does not leave our any perspectives that could have been mentioned.
 * 4) The sources are reliable are appear to mainly be from journals or books.  There were not an unbalanced amount of sources per sentences.
 * 5) There is no lead that has been updates with the new content and there is no introductory sentence.