User:MRawlings73/Apidima Cave/Cornyon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MRawlings73


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MRawlings73/Apidima_Cave?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Apidima Cave

Evaluate the drafted changes
In evaluating the user's Sandbox draft of their additions to the Apidima Cave article, it is clear to me that their additions will contribute significantly to the article as a whole, especially with elaborating on the fossil finds.

Overall, the user's additions are neutral in perspective, not taking any particular stances on the findings. The content is well organized and well written.

I believe that it would benefit the user to include background information to explain who Theodore Pitsios is and his involvement in the expedition and to link him to an article if it exists.

Under the portion referring to Apidima 2, it is recommended to remove the word "recently" when referring to the CT scan taken, because as the article continues, "recently" would continue to imply that the CT scan was in the near past.

The end of the subsection titled "Apidima III", I believe can be built on more. The user made mention of new and better technology that has been used for excavations. What kind of new and better technologies?

All sources chosen by the user are recent and from reliable and diverse sources.

Overall a good addition to the article.