User:MRawlings73/Apidima Cave/Csevi005 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I'm reviewing MRawlings73 draft.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MRawlings73/Apidima Cave


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Apidima Cave

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Overall impressions


 * Facts are given with reliable sources to back up research.
 * I like that it is specific with recent findings and the organization of it all it is complete.
 * The last sentence mentioning development of technology helping paleoanthropology sounds very interesting. Maybe add what other technology is being used at this site? If you can just to bring it back to your content.
 * In addition you mentioned fire, if there is any more information maybe you should add it just a suggestion.
 * Overall I really enjoyed learning about these new findings at the Apidima Cave.