User:MSUSunday/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Andy Schor's page is missing a lot of content.

Evaluate the article
While the article has some election data (i.e. information on the dates of his elections to different positions) it does not contain any other information related to his campaigns, policy positions, voter turnouts, or voter demographic breakdowns. The article is completely missing any content about any of his policy positions, policies he has enacted during office, his response to various issues, or any information regarding his performance during his terms. The article could contain more information about his early life as well, only containing very basic public information.

The article's sources appear to come from official government sites, ensuring it is accurate information, and all of the links appear intact, but also lacking information that isn't immediately accessible to the public, such as any breakdowns from academic, research, or news organizations. Also there appears to be information in many of these sources that is left out of the article, despite it being helpful information and following Wikipedia's rules. This gives the article an incomplete tone, there should be a higher diversity of sources and the lack of content from articles that have already been cited.

There is a lack of images and other available media, despite there being a plethora of public pictures and information about him. The only available picture could have its caption improved.