User:MThomas45512/16th Street Baptist Church bombing/Ashemmasmith Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MThomas45512


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MThomas45512/16th_Street_Baptist_Church_bombing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 16th Street Baptist Church bombing
 * 16th Street Baptist Church bombing

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead was not edited because it provides detailed information about the 16th Street Baptist Church bombing. Both the current content and content that was added are both up to date. The information that was updated did not swing one way or another. It is just further explaining the event of what happened, making the content neutral. All of the sources that were used were up to date, and more than one source was used to edit. The content that was added was well written, easy to read, and easier to understand than the original statement. No pictures or visual representations were added. Overall, this was well edited, but I would suggest an expansion of the information. For example, expand on the nickname "Bomingham" and give more background details.