User:MThomas45512/16th Street Baptist Church bombing/Helyeah27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:MThomas45512/16th Street Baptist Church bombing


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MThomas45512/16th_Street_Baptist_Church_bombing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 16th Street Baptist Church bombing

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There are a few changes made from the original article, shown by the italicized font. However, most of the changes are just changes in syntax. There is not much new information added, except the sentence about segregation in the context of freedom and well-being. This bit of new information is lacking details and sources.