User:MThomas45512/16th Street Baptist Church bombing/Jessmanners Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MThomas45512


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MThomas45512/16th_Street_Baptist_Church_bombing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 16th Street Baptist Church bombing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

There is no lead drafted yet.

Content

The content that is added is up to date and relevant to the article. It talks about the segregation of black people and the restrictions they faced. More information does need to be added to the article.

Tone and Balance

I believe the tone of the draft is neutral and is not biased towards any side. The article discusses the segregation of black people, but it does it in a neutral way.

Sources and References

All the source links work and they reflect the information added in the draft. Every piece of information is backed up by additional information and the sources are thorough. The only issue I found is the one source (number 3) did not have a link to it and you could not access it. Other than that, the sources are all current within the last few years and most are published in academic journals.

Organization

All content is written clearly and in an organized way. I did not notice any grammatical errors and all information is broken down into different sections.

Images and Media

There were no images or media added to the article draft

Overall Impressions

So far the content added has improved the original article. The only thing I would have to say is maybe add more information from different sources.