User:MThomas45512/16th Street Baptist Church bombing/KevinT99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm doing a peer review on the 16th Street Baptist church bombing. I found all of the information included to be clear and relevant to the topic. Also I do not find it to be biased, in my opinion it is a neutral position that doesn't overly emphasize one side. The links for the article work as well, and the sources appear to be reliable. The writing style of the edited section is easy to follow and understand, creating a more enjoyable experience for the reader. The introduction to the edit gives a strong overall focus to what the edit will be discussing, which is important for an introductory sentence. so overall, I find this to be a good addition to the article. Adding relevant information and details on the event that support the overall purpose of the article.