User:MWairimu/Speech language pathology/Adamsshort Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MWairimu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MWairimu/Speech_language_pathology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Speech–language pathology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi,

First, I want to say a great job with the edits that you've added. They're great additions to this wiki article. I feel you've got a neutral tone throughout all of your additions. A couple of questions that came to my mind when reading your additions were, how did the trends influence the evolution of SLP, and was there anything on Speech-language pathology before the 18th century? I  don't think you should add much to answer these questions if you want to address them, but a line or two. Hopefully, this will fill that gap until another editor can add more.

The final thing I could suggest for your work would be to add some images, specifically of the scholars and if there is an ICF logo. This media could help the reader connect this unknown name to a face and provide more meaning. Instead of just remembering the name, they'll have the face as well.