User:Ma-Maysha/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Pixelberry Studios
 * Article Evaluation
 * This particular article only includes an intro, which is decently written with the sources provided. Things look relevant and up-to-date as well. However, it would be interesting to try and expand on this company by attempting to find more information on it. There could be more sections included in this article. For example, in the last sentence, it states that Nexon has acquired Pixelberry Studios, but it doesn't go into more details. Maybe this could be in its own section.
 * The talk page doesn't include anything, so perhaps I can take my ideas there. This article is also apart WikiProject Video games, but it's rated as "low importance."
 * The talk page doesn't include anything, so perhaps I can take my ideas there. This article is also apart WikiProject Video games, but it's rated as "low importance."
 * The talk page doesn't include anything, so perhaps I can take my ideas there. This article is also apart WikiProject Video games, but it's rated as "low importance."


 * Sources

Option 2

 * Article title: Twelve Forever
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is off to a great start. However, the intro seems a bit lacking in comparison to other articles that center around certain cartoons. Perhaps this article can include a brief summary about the show in the intro. Though there is a Plot section, having this brief summary of the show can help particular readers who just want to get straight to the point in certain articles.
 * This article is off to a great start. However, the intro seems a bit lacking in comparison to other articles that center around certain cartoons. Perhaps this article can include a brief summary about the show in the intro. Though there is a Plot section, having this brief summary of the show can help particular readers who just want to get straight to the point in certain articles.


 * Sources

Option 3

 * Article title: Jacqueline Lichtenberg
 * Article Evaluation
 * Perhaps there can be a short section that explains her fanfiction more, considering the fact that it's had enough of an impact to have the series (Kraith) have its own wiki page. Maybe there's some history on it, like why she made it or how she went about it.
 * The intro also seems a bit unorganized. Certain ideas are clumped together, but they don't necessarily connect with one another.
 * The intro also seems a bit unorganized. Certain ideas are clumped together, but they don't necessarily connect with one another.
 * The intro also seems a bit unorganized. Certain ideas are clumped together, but they don't necessarily connect with one another.


 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title: Orange Marmalade (TV Series)
 * Article Evaluation
 * The intro is neutral, yet seems a bit lacking. In other articles regarding TV shows, a lot include not only the episode names, but the episode descriptions as well. Maybe this could be added on to this article to give it more substance.
 * The intro is neutral, yet seems a bit lacking. In other articles regarding TV shows, a lot include not only the episode names, but the episode descriptions as well. Maybe this could be added on to this article to give it more substance.


 * Sources

Option 5

 * Article title: Salem College Center for Women Writers
 * The article could include some more present-day information. Most of the sources are from the early 2000s.


 * Article Evaluation
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