User:Maansak/Acupuncture/Go23bears Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Maansak


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maansak/Acupuncture?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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You do a very good job keeping a neutral tone.

A substance abuse sub-section would be be very beneficial to this article

I think it adds good dimension to your sector discussion to show that acupuncture aid for alcoholism isn't established while there is stronger evidence for narcotic addiction.