User:Maanth/Iroquois/Kennethshyle Peer Review

General info
Maanth
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Maanth/Iroquois?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Clarity: The article is generally clear and presents the information in a coherent manner. However, there are a few sentences that could benefit from improved structure and organization. For example, the sentence "Handsome Lake's teaching tried to center the nuclear family and transferred the women's sphere to be relegated to the home while the men's sphere focused on horticulture" could be rephrased for better clarity.

Tone: The tone of the article appears neutral and objective. It presents the information without any noticeable bias or subjective language.

Accuracy: The article accurately discusses Handsome Lake's teachings and their impact on Iroquois society, including the shift in the roles of women and the influence of elected representatives in the political structure. The inclusion of relevant references reinforces credibility of the article.

Recent research: The article lacks recent research references, as the sources primarily consist of publications from the 1990s however that might be up to date since I haven't done specific research. Also the article could utilize more sources for further information on specific information on Iroquois women. For example the section on Matilda Gage could be expanded as she's only briefly mentioned.